finished drone draft

should anyone be able to buy drones?

claim:there should be stricter laws on who can buy and operate drones

supporting reasons: people can see and steal private information, and they can harm things flying in the air.

buzzzzzzzz! buzzzzzzzz! buzzzzzzzz! the sound of my neighbor’s drone shoots into my ear. i look up to see the drone flying through the air. i quickly duck, i’m in no mood to get hit by a drone today.  drones are used for everything nowadays, from military, to package deliveries, to recreational and fun purposes. but should anybody really be able to use drones?  i think there should be stricter requirements on buying drones. Drones can be a hazard to planes, military, animals, and other things they can come in contact with. drones can also record inappropriate content, and finally, drones can damage or hurt private property.  

first and foremost, drones can be a hazard to planes, military airspace, and animals in the air. sure drones can be fun, but the danger is endless. if a drone was flying and accidentally came in contact with a plane or military aircraft, all the people on board could be injured, or worse. These problems can be easily fixed if drones were only sold to people who knew how to operate them without causing a hazard.

secondly, drones can record inappropriate content.  imagine you are filing your taxes, and you decide to work outside. a drone could easily record all of your personal information, and possible steal money from your bank account. again, this problem could be completely gone if drones were only sold to people who would use them properly. don’t you want to keep your personal information, passwords, and other content safe?

and finally, drones can damage personal property, and people.  a drone can go flying out of control and crash into a house and/or building. this could then injure the property, and possibly the people inside of it. this is definitely a problem that needs action. we need to keep property, people, and other things safe. if there was a restriction on drone buying, these problems would decrease so much! drones are fun and cool, but they are also hazardous. we need to enforce laws to prevent hazards from happening. if we do, i wouldn’t be worried about my neighbor’s drone flying over my head. i would actually enjoy drones, knowing i would be safe.